I'm going to assume it's a 12-team league.
Team 1: I like it. Very balanced. This league starts a LOT of hitters and you did a good job filling those spots. Your OF gets a little thin at the end but that's to be expected when you're starting 5 OF. I like the pitching, too. A couple solid closers, 2 stud pitchers, then 3 solid guys, then 2 high-upside fliers at the end.
Team 2: I like this one, too. Looks like a shallower league, so it's no surprise you have a stacked offense. Not a lot of speed on this team, but that's not a huge deal. The offense isn't stellar; it's obvious you went a little pitching heavy. With that 1-2-3 of Timmy, Halladay, Josh Johnson you should sweep 4/5 pitching cats, and you'll need to because you'll be contending in all the hitting cats but not dominating them.
Both teams pretty solid. Depending on who gets off to a blazing start, seriously think about dealing one of your aces on Team 2 for a big bat.
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