Well, you've got a nice team. Matsui and Soriano for the steals, everyone else for the power cats. Nice, rounded hitting. I don't like Jay Payton much, though he's not terrible. I'm not sure that he should be a starter in a 12 team league.
Your pitching is good. Let me rephrase that: Your starting pitching is good. You know about your closers. They suck. But your starters are good k men with low eras. Nice.
Your bench, however, is barren. Do you really want to start Raul Ibanez or Jimmy Gobble? Really?
It's not a lot of criticism, but it gives you someplace to start. You've got a strong team. Improve your closers and your bench and you should breeze to a top spot. Your strength is 1b. Trade from there.
Now, how about returning the favor?