Hey Chopper, nice team. Actually, for a first draft, this looks absolutely excellent.
If I had to nitpick, there are basically just two points that might be made:
If you have daily lineup changes, I'd love to see another closer on your roster, or possibly two. With five slots available to RPs, you want to take advantage. If you have weekly lineup changes, on the other hand, I probably would have started drafting closers a bit earlier.
Also, there's probably a bit too much focus on upside (as opposed to tried and true), on this roster for my taste.
In any case, those are just minor points, and basically a matter of personal preference to boot. If this draft was in any way competitive, you did great. Going after OF early and still being able to field a very solid infield, for instance, is hard, but you've done just that.