Pretty nice looking team, with two gaping holes: speed and saves. I realize they don't mean as much with the additional scoring categories you have, but notice that without speedsters, you're going to see fewer doubles and triples, too.
You've got a lot of power - you might want to think about trading some of it for speed.
Also, while Otsuka and Gordon are great MRs, in a 12-team league there must have been closers available.
If you drafted this team intending to punt SB and saves, then ignore most of what I just said. I like your top three SP, and those MRs will contribute nicely.