Pavano and Harden as the #13 & #14 rated SP?
Clemens at around the 25th ranked SP?
Unless you are ranking for a Dynasty or Keeper league Clemens should switch places with Harden and Pavano should move down around the Burnett/Mussina area IMO.
I personally like Crawford a little better than Ichiro but that is certainly up for debate (and has been on this site several times).
Overall I like your list a lot! Good Job