CC/Haren is a theoretical wash.
Granderson/Pence at this point is pretty close, edge to Pence for the track record.
Crawford for Victorino/Kendrick is tough, Crawford is heating up a bit but it's not a slam dunk.
I think you are offering too much, especially for an opening offer. I would do something like Crawford/CC for Haren/Victorino/Kendrick. If he bites, great, if he counters then lets hear what he does. Then you could counter with this deal if he's not too high on Grandy.
Goldy is King.