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Postby abrage22 » Fri Apr 02, 2010 5:58 pm

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i like this one. C+C wanted ;-D
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Re: Greinke

Postby whitesox » Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:05 pm

It has a lot of potential. I think the text is too simple and the background could be better. But not bad.
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Re: Greinke

Postby stevereigh » Sun Apr 04, 2010 2:00 am

I agree with whitesox. The text could use some work, and the whole thing makes me think my monitor is dirty or somethin. That white overlay is messing with me. Take it off or try sharpening the image. Are you using photoshop?

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Re: Greinke

Postby Metroid » Sun Apr 04, 2010 10:53 am

This is too washed out, and there is too much of a void to the right and left of the render, and speaking of the render it's kind of boring. Not what you've done to it, just the image itself. I agree with the previous posters, the text could use some work.
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Re: Greinke

Postby smoovethug » Mon Apr 05, 2010 7:52 pm

and there is too much of a void to the right and left of the render


This. I don't mind the washed out look, in fact I kind of dig it. I like the render effects and the choice of render is fine to me also as it's different. I just feel like it looks unfinished or that there should be a little more going on here. Maybe you just wanted to keep it simple? If that's so maybe try a canvas that isn't as wide? The text could use some work but it's not terrible nor is it the main concern here IMO. Nice start to a sig that has alot of potential.
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