First Cafe Sig

[whitesox]

Hey guys! I'm glad to be a part of another forum that has a gfx section. This is my first sig in a long time. Trying to shake the rust off. Let me know what you think!

[stevereigh]

Very cool looking, I really like the style. Couple quick questions, am I supposed to not be able to read the writing on the left? And the same goes for the text right above his name... Other than that, very cool sig.

9/10

[whitesox]

Very cool looking, I really like the style. Couple quick questions, am I supposed to not be able to read the writing on the left? And the same goes for the text right above his name... Other than that, very cool sig.

9/10

Thanks for the comments! As for your questions, the text on the left is more for decoration but the text above his name should be readable. Thanks!

[Metroid]

Yeah I cannot read the text above his name very well, I think it says "the next big thing"? To me it seems very busy but it's blended very well. It's also a little darker than I like but that's just me.

[smoovethug]

It's not bad. I like the detail although it's a bit busy for me. I'm not really a fan of the design over the Beckham render or the text itself. Fine work though.

[whitesox]

Thanks for the input on both Smoove! I really appreciate the criticism.

[soty]

I agree with smoove about the design over Beckham. Take that out and it looks much better. Glad to see another artist around here.

[stevereigh]

Thanks for the input on both Smoove! I really appreciate the CONSTRUCTIVEcriticism.

Fixed. Nobody is criticizing you, its very good work it just needs a few minor touch ups to be great!

[rookies and cream]

Good job. I agree with other criticism, but overall I like it.