First off, thanks for looking at my team, my dude.
It looks like a strong, strong offense, especially when aRAH comes back. He's going to replace Hafner at UTIL, right? You have a surplus of outfielders - Hawpe and Werth are solid OFs and are kind of extra on your team. Pablo Sandoval at C and Furcal at SS in a 10-team league could be improved on, in my opinion. I might try to upgrade over at least one of them.
The pitching looks solid with good depth, but unspectacular. You don't have an top-tier ace, which you probably went for intentionally. It looks like you went for offense in your draft, then netted a whole bunch of #2/3 guys in later rounds. Randy Johnson's age scares me, but the NL West could be kind to him.
Overall, a nicely assembled team with a potentially formidable offense when A-Rod comes back. You could upgrade at C, SS, or with a top-10 pitcher. Actually, for now, I'd start Hawpe over Hafner at UTIL.
As for Team #2... starting Inge and Orlando Hudson is pretty lol to me. He has a great outfield, terrible bench. I think he has better pitching. Halladay/Harden/Cain/Lowe/a returning Daisuke is much more dangerous than Kazmir/Greinke/Nolasco/Bedard. Although I don't know what he's doing with Masterson as a Daisuke replacement, he's in the Sox bullpen normally for a reason.
So, you have a better offense, he has better pitching. You have better trade chips for upgrading with your OF glut and your pitching depth, however.