I agree with Snakes. Not trying to sound like a jerk either, just trying to help. I dont like the border, just a plain simple skinny black one would do just fine. The text and ivy are both funky and kind of take away from the sig. Like Snakes said its sort of distracting. I am not a big fan of using fancy text. Take a simple one and make it your own. Finally your cutting...I am sure you already know you have to work on that. I am not perfect at cutting either, but with each one I do I get better and better. As they say practice makes perfect (or at least close to it
) Finally on a positive note...this sig is better than your other sig, so there are definitely improvements. Just keep working at it, it will come with time and practice.