4th Sig. Trying new stuff

[Yanks_Baby]

This was is totalyl different than all of my previous ones. What do you guys think?



I tried palying around with effects and lighting.

[abrage22]

its not there

[Yanks_Baby]

OK, I fixed it. So tell me what you think.

[abrage22]

this one is definetly better than ur last one
ur text needs alot of work though. and i dont know if i'd that soriano pick, its got a nice ivy backround, but u can only see sorianos back.

[Yanks_Baby]

this one is definetly better than ur last one
ur text needs alot of work though. and i dont know if i'd that soriano pick, its got a nice ivy backround, but u can only see sorianos back.

That's actually what I ws aiming for. I wanted him making a catch. I threw in a pic of his face on the side.

[Snakes Gould]

whatever effect you have on the ivy is pretty distracting to me. i would have just left the ivy as is.

the cut on soriano could be better around the head.

the border is too much for my liking.

the teal text doesnt seem to go with the sig. i would have just stuck to the blue.


i know it sounds like im ripping apart the whole sig, but i hope you take my criticisms well and use them to your advantage.

[Yanks_Baby]

whatever effect you have on the ivy is pretty distracting to me. i would have just left the ivy as is.

the cut on soriano could be better around the head.

the border is too much for my liking.

the teal text doesnt seem to go with the sig. i would have just stuck to the blue.


i know it sounds like im ripping apart the whole sig, but i hope you take my criticisms well and use them to your advantage.

Thanks man. The Ivy plain sorta melded into soriano, and made him ahrd to identify, so I funked it up. The lettering I'm always crappy at.

[bpizle]

I didnt get a chance to see your last one, but I can tell you that the ivy is not there, the text is not there, your original plan was nice, the back catch and then the face to the right, but idk.. Keep working.

[soty]

I agree with Snakes. Not trying to sound like a jerk either, just trying to help. I dont like the border, just a plain simple skinny black one would do just fine. The text and ivy are both funky and kind of take away from the sig. Like Snakes said its sort of distracting. I am not a big fan of using fancy text. Take a simple one and make it your own. Finally your cutting...I am sure you already know you have to work on that. I am not perfect at cutting either, but with each one I do I get better and better. As they say practice makes perfect (or at least close to it ) Finally on a positive note...this sig is better than your other sig, so there are definitely improvements. Just keep working at it, it will come with time and practice.

[NorthSider2]

Wow. I think its really cool. Not to mention its Soriano Keep up the good work