Personally I don't know how much I like this team in a 10 team league. First of all how did you get Hafner 1B eligibility? League settings a little different?
Greene is probably the worst starting SS in the league, and thats not taking anything away from him but his BA hurts in a league of this size.
I love your OF with the exception of Manny, who along with Chipper need to be monitored carefully.
Crisp isn't really draftable in a league like this quite frankly, there has to be people who will put up his numbers 10 fold on the wire.
Santana is VERY nice, but Young has questiosn about him, Gallardo has health issues, and unless this is a keeper league having Carpenter on your team is humorous at best. You'll have him for 6 weeks at best, pick someone more helpful to stash on your DL.
This team just doesn't jump out at me because of all the concerns, something that should be minimal in a league of this size. This team has upside, don't get me wrong, just alot of high risk/high reward guys in my opinion.