Yeah, you made a few reaches here and there. Andruw Jones was taken a round or two early. You're really rolling the dice on Harden and Weaver in the 4th and 6th respectively and who knows if Drew and Gordon live up to the hype for where you drafted them.
I find that building a team top-heavy in offense the first few rounds is the way to go in H2H. I always look at the first 6 rounds to dictate the rest of my draft. Ideally, I want 4 top offensive players, 1 top ace, and if there's a top-line RP left, 1 top closer to build my team around. I find that this philosophy works and you might want to incorporate that in future drafts.