I'll give it an 8.5, but that's because you did a great job on the two additional hitting stats (it's a subtle change that can revalue guys that can't take a pitch and doubles the ding for guys who can't hit for average or hit at the end of the lineup). I checked most of your hitters for OBP and Hits and
That being said, Hardy and Ike Davis have to go. They'll drag down you down in both new stats where you'll otherwise shine (both of their OBPs are atrocious and meh on hits). To be fair, Davis get quite a few walks,but if his average is like last year it won't matter (he had 60 BBs last season and STILL only had an OBP of .308).
If you can somehow snag a Castro for his hits, you'll be great. I also really like Markakis, who is usually good for 180 hits each season and an OBP around .360). He's taken a hit in his projected stats this season, but I bet you can get him for lower than he's worth in a league with this format.